Would you like to read my stories?

[spoiledangel860505]

I am a college student and I hate writing English essays, but you get me to write about sex and I guess I have a true talent so I am told, yet its kinda funny because I don't have any sexual experience at all, so I'm only going by imagination.
Please post comments to these stories. Feel free to post reviews on the website also and rate the stories.


http://www.asexstories.com/Dons-Dream/ (Guy I met had a real dream)

http://www.asexstories.com/Our-First-Meeting/ (fantasy)

http://www.asexstories.com/First-Masturbation-Experience/ (true story)

http://www.asexstories.com/My-first-Bi-Experience/ (based on a true friendship, certain things did actually happen, nothing sexual though)

http://www.asexstories.com/Jeremy-and-I/ (I don't really know what this is about)

I have others that I wrote when I was 14-15 and are also on the same site but I do not wish to share them as they are cheesy and they won't let me delete them from the site.

Please comments welcome!

[spoiledangel860505]

17 views but no comments, I want to know what you guys think about these stories. :) Don't be shy, be honest.

[ghytifrdnr]

Good imagination, but maybe it's time for some real-world experience. :)

[Bi-ten]

Hi darlin,

Maybe nobody has commented because they are too busy getting off;) I think your writing is simple and effective, very hot. The topics are interesting and you don't beat around the bush (so to speak).

I think you will only get better as your experience increases. I personally would like to hear more description about the emotional and physical feelings the main character is experiencing.

Its really good stuff, keep up the good work. By the way I did get off on the bi story lol.

Hugs, Sally

[spoiledangel860505]

Good imagination, but maybe it's time for some real-world experience. :)
Gotta have a boyfriend first for that...and even with a boyfriend, I don't believe in intercourse before marriage, oral, anal that's fine I am waiting to lose my virginity to my husband.

I don't know most people think its stupid but I was raised old fashion and I am very involved with my church which frowns on sex before marriage. I just think that its something that I should share with someone that I will spend the rest of my life with, not a one night stand.

Stories are one of the ways right now that I can find out what I would like sexually. I'm writing another one for the first time with another person, I am excited on how its going to turn out.

[spoiledangel860505]

Hi darlin,

Maybe nobody has commented because they are too busy getting off;) I think your writing is simple and effective, very hot. The topics are interesting and you don't beat around the bush (so to speak).

I think you will only get better as your experience increases. I personally would like to hear more description about the emotional and physical feelings the main character is experiencing.

Its really good stuff, keep up the good work. By the way I did get off on the bi story lol.

Hugs, Sally

That is true lol......I am glad that it got you off :-), thanks for your comment. I'll update this forum when my new story comes out on that site, I'm writing it with another person, it will be interesting to see if its better than just my writing alone.

[dans94]

"Posted by Dan
A very exciting story spoiledangel!! You have a nice, easygoing writing style that is also very detailed and descriptive. If what you say is true, you also have an excellent imagination. ;) Is this something you really wanted to do with your friend? "

Hey, this is my critique on your bi article. Excuse me for not posting it here. :)
Although I didn't get off reading it, I came very close. :bigrin: :crosseye:

[Mrs. Taz]

nice stories, :) you should start writing books like these. I love the juicy romance stories.

[spoiledangel860505]

"Posted by Dan
A very exciting story spoiledangel!! You have a nice, easygoing writing style that is also very detailed and descriptive. If what you say is true, you also have an excellent imagination. ;) Is this something you really wanted to do with your friend? "

Hey, this is my critique on your bi article. Excuse me for not posting it here. :)
Although I didn't get off reading it, I came very close. :bigrin: :crosseye:

Yes it is definitely something I wanted to do with my friend, I haven't seen her in over 10 years, she doesn't know I am bi nor does she know I wrote a story about her. Maybe one day I'll tell her.